Comments on: Roses, Briars, Blood: Part 2

By: alex

alex — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 08:54:00 +0000

WELL I ENJOYED READING IT ESPECIALLY THE PARTS IN THE WOODS WITH THE WITCH RISING, IT S A SHAME SHE COULDN T PICK UP A WAND IN THE WOODS, SHE IS A REALLY GOOD INFLUENCE FOR THE OTHER CHARACTERS WITH HER TAIL.I M HAPPY TO SEE YOU RE HAVING FUN>

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By: winters3

winters3 — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 03:20:42 +0000

Your comments again, are so interesting, Alex. They add so much to the story. It is just a version of the traditional fairy tale. I wanted to see what would come out of my imagination after living with this story all of my life. Its a very revealing exercise. Fun though, and easy since the plot is already given — though there is a twist at the end of this one that springs organically out of the relationship between the Sorceress and the Princess…

By: alex

alex — Thu, 02 Jul 2009 10:21:41 +0000

SO THE KINGS INNER CHILD IS DEAD AND THE QUEEN S SLEEPING BEAUTY IS ALIVE

By: alex

alex — Thu, 02 Jul 2009 10:02:59 +0000

AND THE QUEEN GOES LIKE A SNAKE INTO THE WOODS.YOU FEEL A LITTLE BIT SAD FOR THE QUEEN CAUSE SHE IS BLOCKED, AND PROBABLY IS A WITCH HERSELF,WHEREAS THE KING DOESN T SEEM TO HAVE ANY EMOTIONS, SO A KISS WOULD BREAK THE SPELL.THE QUEENS SLEEPING BEAUTY IS MATERIALISED IN THE DAUGHTER, JUST AS THE KING IS MATERIALISED IN A DEAD SON. I LIKE HOW ALL THE CHARACTERS GO ONE INTO THE OTHER LIKE RUSSIAN DOLLS.BUT I FEEL REALLY IRRITATED BY THE KING.

By: alex

alex — Thu, 02 Jul 2009 09:36:00 +0000

THAT S WHY I THINK IT IS EROTIC, CAUSE IT IS ABOUT ALCHEMY. I SUPPOSE THAT THE VEIL BETWEEN THE QUEEN AN D THE KING IS GOING TO BE LIFTED WITH THE DAUGHTER AND THE PRINCE, BECAUSE OF THE SPIRIT LINE, JUST THE LAND HAS TO REMAIN FALLOW FOR SOMETIME. SO THE WHOLE COURT DIES TO BE REBORN.
I ALSO NOTICED YOU DIDN T HAVE A FOOL.I FELT THE QUEEN A LITTLE BIT LIKE THAT WHEN SHE GOES “ENTERTAIN” THE GUESTS.THEN THE COURT LOOKS A LITTLE BIT LIKE A MOCKERY. ALSO I LIKE WHEN THE KING SAYS TO THE QUEEN “SNUGGLE UP”, CAUSE IT IS LIKE ONE SIDED AND ECHOES THE WORD YOU USE FOR A SNAKE, CAUSE SHE LOOKS RECOILED AND YOU CAN PICTURE HER IN FOETAL POSITION, OR LIKE AN EGG THAT IS GOING TO BE FERTILIZED BY A RUSTY SWORD. SO I FEEL IT IS EROTIC AS A STORY, CAUSE ENERGY ARE TRYING TO MEET. I LOVE THE WITCH CAUSE SHE LOOKS MORE LIKE A QUEEN TO ME, AND ESPECIALLY THE NINE LADIES CAUSE THEY BARELY WALK AND SEEM TO BLEND ONE INTO THE OTHER, SO SOMETIMES YOU WONDER IF THEY ARE HERE CAUSE THEY ARE LIKE THE MOON.

By: alex

alex — Thu, 02 Jul 2009 08:49:08 +0000

this story make me think of the snake rising, almost lucifer rising.the queen s magic is clearly absent. i like the fact that the woods come t6o the court like a snake. unfortunately the queen got beheaded i guess because she was indecisive about her own nature. i believe there is a PARALLEL BETWEEN THE WITCH AND THE PROCESSION THAT FOLLOWS HER AND WHAT IS HAPPENING INSIDE THE QUEEN. THEN THE KING DOESN T REALLY SEEM TO MIND. SO IS THE QUEEN GOING TO RISE THROUGH HER DAUGHTER? AND ALSO THIS KIND OR RITUAL IN THE WOODS SEEMS TO ECHO WHAT FAILS TO HAPPEN INSIDE THE QUEEN, SO IT LOOKS LIKE SHE IS ON THE PATH OF VIRGIN BIRTH? IT IS VERY ENCHANTING>