Comments on: Roses, Briars, Blood: Part 4

By: alex

alex — Sat, 11 Jul 2009 10:56:25 +0000

yes and i am sure that i can only see the surface, because i m not attuned so imagine somebody even more attuned than me.

By: winters3

winters3 — Sat, 11 Jul 2009 03:59:46 +0000

Alex you really made my day! It really justifies all this hard work when you tell me that my word shave that effect on you. The images have that effect on me, so I try to share that feeling with words and can only hope that they cast the proper spell.
Thank you so much!
Arlene

By: alex

alex — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 11:53:45 +0000

I DON T WANT TO SEEM VULGAR OR OUT OF PLACE BUT IT IS REALLY LIKE BREAST FEEDING, IT IS VERY NOURISHING.YO REALLY ARE A GODDESS

By: alex

alex — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 11:39:45 +0000

WINTER IS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL ATMOSPHERE

By: alex

alex — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 11:39:05 +0000

ALSO I STOPPED READING CASE LOTS OF WRITERS ARE TOO HEAVY, BT THIS IS LIKE MOON, IT S BEATIFUL, AND ALL THE DARK COLORS AND AMBIENCE AND CORRIDORS IT IS SO MAGNETIC, YOU CAN T REALLY RESIST A CALL LIKE THAT.I VE NEVER EXPERIENCED SUCH A THING I MY WHOLE LIFE. I M NOT EXAGERATING, IT S BEYOND COOL.

By: alex

alex — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 11:30:54 +0000

IT S MESMERIZING AND ENTRANCING, I STILL FEEL I AM THERE.

By: alex

alex — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 11:29:37 +0000

IT S FUNNY CAUSE IT ACTUALLY IS A SHORT STORY BUT IT JUST KEEPS ON GOING IN HTE OTHERWORLD AND GROWS AND GROWS AND GROWS. IT S SHORT BUT MEANS SO MUCH. THE WORDS ARE SO SHINY AND OPEN SO MUCH, LIKE IT IS ALIVE.IT SO CHARGED, IT REALLY GIVES ME A HIGH IF I MAY SAY. I DON TKNOW IT S LIKE YOU DON TREAD THE WORDS , BUT YOU R E IN A BOAT AND YOU RE FLOOATING ON THE OCEAN WITH THE MOON ON THE HORIZON.I DON T KNOW HOW TO EXPRESS IT, BT IT IS LIKE FLOATING ON A BREEZE AT THE SAME TIME AND YO DON T HAVE TIME TO READ THE WORDS SO YOU JUST GO WITH THE FLOW, IT IS LIKE BREATHING LIFE. IT S SO COOL.

By: alex

alex — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 11:17:08 +0000

AND THE CASTLE IS LIKE A LABYRINTH IN THE REAL OF THE MOON WITH ITS DARK CORNERS, AND EVEN THE KING STARTS TO FEEL LOST, YOU CAN FEEL SOMETHING TAHT WANTS TO COME OUT. I ENJOY YOUR WRITING VERY MUCH IT IS LIKE SIMPLE, BUT THERE IS SO MUCH SAID WHEN THE VEIL OF WORDS IS LIFTED, THERE S LIKE A WHOLE MYSTERY AND THE READER SEEMS LIKE DRAWN IN THE CORNERS OF HIS OWN IMAGINATION. IT IS REALLY MAGICAL. I REALLY WISH YOU GET PUBLISHED.NOT MANY WRITERS ARE LIKE YOU, YOU R EREALLY OUTSTANDING

By: alex

alex — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 11:07:45 +0000

THAT PART 4 WAS CERTAINLY UNEXPECTED, I GUESS THE WITCH IS KIND OF STUCK. IT SHEDS A COMPLETLY DIFFERENT MOONBEAM ON THE OTHER PART. I REALLY LOVED THAT PICTURE WHERE YO LOOK OUT OF THE WINDOW WITH MOUNTAINS OF SNOW. YOU FEEL LIKE YOU RE STANDING THERE, AWINDOW WITHIN A WINDOW.THE LANDSCAPE SEEMS FAMILIAR.ALSO I NOTICED THE EVENTS AND THE SPINNING OF WORDS ACCELERATED WITH THE FAST SPINNING OF THE WITCH. THE EFFECT IS REALLY OMINOUS.IT S VERY COOL.